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The table shows five types of registered motor vehicle in Australia in 2010 and 2015, with the change of percentage over these five years.
主體段分段:
方法1:按照<時間>分段 (本篇文章采取此種分段方法)
方法2:按照<變化幅度>分段
開頭段
The table compares the figures for five types of automobiles registered in Australia in 2010 and 2015.
概述段
Overall, the total number of vehiclesincreasedover this period,withlight business vehiclesexperiencing the most dramatic growth. Carsremained the most common vehicle typein both years,whilemotorcycles werethe least popular.
思路要點:
- 整體數(shù)量上升
- light business vehicle上漲幅度最大
- cars數(shù)量始終最高,motorcycles數(shù)值始終最低
Body paragraph 1
In 2010, 3.73 million motor vehicles were registered.Among them, carsdominated the marketwith 1.58 million registrations,followed bytrucks with 1 million registrations and camper vans with 750,000.In contrast, light business vehicleshad the fewest registrations, at just 150,000—100,000fewer thanmotorcycles.
思路要點:2010年
- total:3,730,000
- cars數(shù)值最高(1,580,000),trucks排名第二(1,000,000),camper vans排名第三(750,000)
- light business vehicles數(shù)值最低(150,000),比motorcycles低100,000
Body paragraph 2
Subsequently, all categorieswitnessed a risein their registrations,bringing the total number of vehicles to5.35 million in 2015, representing a 43% increase.A similar growth rate was observed inthe figure for motorcycles,which reached350,000. Light business vehiclessaw the sharpest rise,tripling to450,000 by 2015.Likewise, car registrationssurgedby 58%,reaching2.5 million during the same period.
思路要點:2015年
- 所有類別數(shù)值都上升,total達到5,350,000,上漲了43%
- Motorcycles漲幅類似,達到350,000
- Light business vehicles漲幅最大,2015年上漲了3倍達到450,000
- Cars也急劇上升了58%,達到2,500,000
Body paragraph 3
In comparison,such rapid growth was not exhibited inthe other two vehicles.This was particularly evident incamper vans, whose registrationsincreased by just13%.Similarly, the number of truckssaw a modest climb to1.2 million in 2015, marking a 20% growth.
思路要點:
- 其余兩種漲幅較小
- Camper vans僅僅上漲了13%
- Trucks也小幅度上升了20%達到1,200,000
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