March 27, 2025

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分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對，最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。

The bar charts below show information about driving license in a particular European country.

主體段分段方法：

一圖一段

開頭段

The first bar chart illustrates changes in the proportions of males and females holding a driver’s license from 1976 to 2006, while the second chart compares the percentage of male and female drivers aged 17-20 over the period from 1996 to 2006.

概述段

Overall,althoughboth gendersexperienced a rising trendin the proportion of driving license holders, malesconsistently outnumberedtheir female counterpart throughout the given period.Additionally,there was a decrease inthe 17-to-20-year-old drivers.

思路要點：

- 1976-2006之間男女比例都上升，但都是男生比例>女生比例

- 年輕司機(17-20歲)的比例下降

Body paragraph 1

In terms of the comparison betweenmale and female drivers,it is clear thatthere was an upward trend forboth genders. The percentage of malesgrew steadily, risingfrom 70% to 80% between 1976 and 2006. The proportion of womenalsoincreased,butmore significantly,doublingfrom around 30% to 60% during the same period.

思路要點：圖1

- 男女比例都上升

- males：1976年的70%→小幅度上升，到2006年達到80%

- females：也上升，但變化顯著，從30%上漲兩倍，達到60%

Body paragraph 2

However, the proportion of young drivers (aged from 17 to 20)declinedover the period.This decrease was particularly notable forfemales,with the figure dropping significantlyfrom 30% in 1996 to 20% in 2006.Similarly,these years witnessed a slight fall inthe percentage of male drivers,reaching45% in 2006.

思路要點2：圖2

- 17-20歲的年輕駕駛員數量呈現下降趨勢

- females：從1996年的30%顯著下降到2006年的20%

- males：小幅度下降，2006年達到45%

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