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The graph below shows annual amount(kg) of meat eaten by per person per year in five different countries from 1961 to 2013.

分段方法：

方法1：按照 <趨勢> 分段

- Body 1：UK，China，Brazil（整體呈上升趨勢）

- Body 2：Canada，Kenya（整體呈下降趨勢）

方法2：按照 <數(shù)值大小> 分段——本篇文章采用此種分段方法

- Body 1：Canada，UK（整體數(shù)值較高）

- Body 2：China，Brazil，Kenya（整體數(shù)值較低）

開頭段

The line graph compares the per capita meat consumption (in kilograms per person) in five countries from 1961 to 2013.

概述段

It is clear thatCanada and UKconsistently consumed more meat thanthe other three countries throughout the given period.WhileCanada and Kenyaexperienced a decline intheir meat consumption, the reverse was true for the other countries.

思路要點(diǎn)：Canada、UK

- Canada、UK整體數(shù)值較高

- Canada、Kenya數(shù)值整體 呈下降趨勢，其余三個國家呈上升趨勢

Body paragraph 1

In 1961, Canadatook the leadwith a consumption of 55 kilograms per person.This figurerose steadily, reaching a peak of70 kilograms in 1991,before falling significantly toroughly 60 kilograms by 2013. The figure in UKfollowed a similar pattern,increasing noticeablyto 55 kilograms in 1981,followed by a slight dip to50 kilograms in 1991.However, in the next 22 years,this figurerose marginally by2 kilograms,surpassingCanada’s consumption in 2012.

思路要點(diǎn)：Canada，UK

- Canada：1961年數(shù)值所有國家中最高(55kg)→到1991年顯著上升到峰值70kg→到2013年顯著下到60kg

- UK：1961年到1981年顯著上升達(dá)到55kg→1991年小幅度下降到50kg→到2013年輕微上升了2kg，其中在2012年與Canada有交點(diǎn)

Body paragraph 2

By contrast, the figures in the remaining three countries were lower. Chinahad the lowest consumptionin 1961(only 2 kilograms).Aftera slow growth to5 kilograms in 1981, its consumptionsoaredto 40 kilograms in 2013, making itthe third-largest consumer of meatby the end of the period.Likewise, the figure in Brazil, whichalmost equaledthat in China until 1981(5 kilograms),tripledby 2013.Conversely,the given 52-year period witnessed a gradual decline inKenya’s meat consumption,droppingto just 5 kilograms in 2013.

思路要點(diǎn)：China，Brazil，Kenya

- China，Brazil，Kenya整體數(shù)值較低

- China：1961年數(shù)值為2kg→到1981年小幅度上升到5kg→到2013年急劇上升到40kg，在這一年China數(shù)值排第三

- Brazil：在1981年之前和China數(shù)值幾乎相等→到2013年上漲了3倍

- Kenya：1961年到2013年持續(xù)下降，到2013年為5kg

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